Transcript 英文科技論文

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(Worse) Joint cooperation between the two
organizations depends on whether the
available resources are adequate enough.
(Better) Cooperation between the two
organizations depends on adequate available
resources.
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(Worse) A major breakthrough in modern
technology of today is the emergence of
artificial intelligence.
(Better) A breakthrough in modern technology
is the emergence of artificial intelligence.
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(Worse) The major benefit of the proposal is
that the true facts about the very unique
industrial situation can be obtained.
(Better) The major benefit of the proposal is
the ability to obtain the facts about the
unique industrial situation.
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(Worse) The final outcome between the two
teams was an unexpected surprise .
(Better) The outcome between the two teams
was a surprise.
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(Worse) During that period in time, the fabrics
were of cheap quality and rough in texture.
(Better) During that period, the fabrics were
cheap and rough textured.
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(Worse) The physical phenomenon that
occurs in the physics field is often times of
an uncertain condition and extreme in
degree.
(Better) The physical phenomenon that
occurs in physics is often uncertain and
extreme.
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(Worse) The terrible tragedy was unusual in
nature and of a strange type.
(Better) The tragedy was unusual and strange.
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(Worse) It is the terminal that communicates
with the mainframe to accomplish tasks.
(Better) The terminal communicates with the
mainframe to accomplish tasks.
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(Worse) There is an engineer who adjusts the
parameters.
(Better) An engineer adjusts the parameters.
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(Worse) It is computer networking that allows
a group of interconnected computers to
achieve a number of important tasks.
(Better) Computer networking allows a group
of interconnected computers to achieve many
(OR several) important tasks.
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(Worse) There is a manager who makes a
compilation of the data and performs an
arrangement of the assignments.
(Better) A manager compiles the data and
arranges the assignments.
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(Worse) It is ink jet printers that vastly
outsell laser and multifunction printers in
view of the fact that they print in color as
well as black and white.
(Better) Ink jet printers vastly outsell laser
and multifunction printers because they
print in color as well as black and white.