Transcript 英文科技論文

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(Worse) A stipulation of the agreement is that
the parties are in compliance with the rules .
(Better) The agreement stipulates that the
parties comply with the rules.
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(Worse) There is a general consensus among
the board members that the proposal would
be beneficial to the organizations.
(Better) The board members generally agree
that the proposal would benefit the
organizations.
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Depending on the sentence‘s context,
correlate with, correspond to or confer with
can be used as alternatives to agree when the
Chinese meaning is 同意
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(Worse) The underlying notion of the
proposed procedure is the assumption that
all factors are equal.
(Better) The proposed procedure assumes
that all factors are equal.
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(Worse) An attempt is made in this study to
minimize the total cost.
(Better) This study attempts to minimize the
total cost.
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To increase word variety in a sentence,
attempts and aims can be used as
alternatives to tries when the Chinese
meaning is 嘗試.
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(Worse) The proposed procedure is made up
of many variables.
(Better) The proposed procedures consists
(comprises) of many variables.
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(Worse) Factor A is heavily dependent on
Factor B.
(Better) Factor A heavily depends on Factor
B.
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Depending on the sentence‘s context, relies
on and, occasionally, hinges on can be used
as alternatives to depends on when the
Chinese meaning is 依賴 .
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(Worse) The optimization approach provides
an explanation of the large-scale problem.
(Better) The optimization approach explains
the large-scale problem.
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(Worse) A more feasible approach makes a
determination of all of the variables.
(Better) A more feasible approach determines
all of the variables.
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(Worse) The following section provides
recommendations on improvements to be
made in the conventional design.
(Better) The following section recommends
how to improve the conventional design.
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(Worse) The purpose of this study is to more
thoroughly understand the MCG problem.
(Better) This study attempts (aims) to more
thoroughly understand the MCG problem.
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(Worse) There is a requirement that all factors
be considered.
(Better) All factors must be considered.
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(Worse) A star configuration is comprised of a
series of computers connected through a
central point with a device known as a hub.
(Better) A star configuration comprises
(consists) of a series of computers connected
through a central point with a device known
as a hub.
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Depending on the sentence‘s context,
stronger verbs of consists of and comprises
of are preferred to is made of or is comprised
of on when the Chinese meaning is 由某物製作
而成 .