Transcript Writing 101
Writing 101
Writing across the curriculum
Improving writing
Write everyday
6+1 Writing Traits
Organization
Ideas
Word Choice
Sentence Fluency
Voice
Conventions
Presentation
Writing Process
Planning
Drafting
Revising
Editing
Publishing
Improving Writing Skills—Essential
Components
Direct instruction
Feedback
Teacher
Individual and specific
Variety of tools
Strengths
Accessible to all learning styles
Next steps
Write
Every day
All subject areas
Variety of text structures
Common language/terminology
Criteria for feedback clearly stated
Writing connected to reading
To get better at reading you read
To get better at writing you write
Free response as a formative measure of writing
Free response
Read a selection aloud—stop and ask students to
respond
Write a sentence or draw a picture (younger
students)
Responses about content, character, or vocabulary
Responses may include:
What do you like or dislike about the text
Where does the selection take place?
How does it make you feel?
What do you predict will happen?
How does the character remind you of
someone you know?
How does the text connect to you and your
life?
Think, pair, share or turn to your neighbor
Reread your response to yourself
Group discussion
Still agree with your response?
No right or wrong answers
Writing development
At first it may be summary types of response—that is what students are
used to
Expands on ideas
Improves sentence fluency
Gives voice to writing
Improves comprehension of reading
Using responses to improve writing:
Complete sentences
Makes sense
Short and choppy or run-on
Start all sentences the same way
Simple or more complex sentences (Adjectives, adverbs)
Strong action verbs
Take risks with new words or voice
Improving writing at the
sentence level
Basic writing
Building better sentences
Pictures give kids words—Paint a picture using words
Write down their responses
Model conventions—Use word sentence to discuss what you are writing
Choose action words rather than passive words
Pattern—who, action, finish the thought (Three box sentences)
Add descriptors—Adjectives and adverbs
Add phrases and clauses (four box sentences)
Three block writing
Four block writing
Moving to paragraphs
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Topic Sentence
Declarative statement--simple
Number word included
Situation/stand (starter words)
Ask a question—paragraph will answer the question
Beware
My name is_____ and today I will tell you about….
In this paper, I will tell you about…..
I’m going to write about….
Deadly duo:
There are
Here are
Body sentences
Big ideas
Transitons
First, second, third—level one
Transition words and phrases
Repetition of word or thought, pattern
Conclusions
Strong ending
Summarize
Repeat of topic sentence with different words
“clincher”
Words that signal a conclusion
Examples and non examples of good
conclusion words
Good conclusive words
Actually
As a result
Certainly
Clearly
Consequently
Definitely
In fact
Obviously
Surely/truly
Beware
All in all
In conclusion
That is all
The end
I hope you like my paper
Let’s Summarize!
Short and Sweet
Summary or Retell?
Summary>3rd or 4th Grade
Big ideas
Written
Retell< 3rd or 4th Grade
Main idea and details (Sometimes
all details)
Oral
Lengthy, may contain information
not necessarily found in the text
Short, sequential, few details
A Good Summary should….
Significantly shorter than original text
Paraphrasing using own words not directly copied from text
Big ideas in sequential order
Eliminate most details (especially fluff)
No personal opinions
No outside information not found in text.
Writing a good summary—Step 1: Topic
sentence
Name it (name of article and author)
Verb it (What it does)
Big picture (What does it tell me, what does it say?)
List of verbs: tells, shows, describes, explains, discusses, listts, explores,
illustrates, teaches, compares, contrasts
Write a summary Step 2—Paraphrase big
ideas.
Jot dots using rule of 5 (five or less words)
Encourages paraphrasing and chunking
4-6 jot dots (most of the time)
Beginning, middle, end. (sequential)
Main ideas from story.
Write a summary: Step 3 Write out loud
Turn to a neighbor and orally write you summary from your topic sentence
and jot dots
Turn each jot dot into a complete sentence
Practice
Helps clarify ideas
Write a summary Step 4 and 5
4: Keep plan close by to refer back to.
5. Write the summary
Response to Literature—Summary plus
Short summary
Personal connections—to self, world, or other text
Author’s message or lesson, including a personal comment
Questions
Thank you!