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书面表达写作技巧指导 Clothes make the man. 人要衣装，佛要金装。 Beauty is the combination of three-tenths of gift and seven-tenths of grooming. 三分长相，七分打扮。 如何 使文章 “靓”起来 1. 使用较高级的词汇 advanced words and phrases 技 巧 2. 使用较丰富的句式 abundant sentence patterns 3. 使用恰当的连接词 proper conjunctions 4 合 理 添 加 句 子 一、善用高级词汇 二、善用高档句式 1. 使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档。 2. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力。 3. 尝试多样化表达方式。 如何在内容上言之有物？ 三、善于合理添加句子 （一）附加成分作解释说明 拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。 1、这样更方便照顾父母。 原因 It will be much more convenient to look after your parents as they are getting older and older. 2、因广告过多， 影片放映晚点 。 后 拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火 。 果 There were so many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film, which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed. making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed. 3. 安全出口（exit）标志不明， 存在 条 安全隐患(potential hazard）。 拓展：万一遇到危险， 观众难以逃 脱。 The exit is not clear, so there will be potential hazard. In case of danger, it is difficult for the audience to escape. 件 方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因 后果及条件，目的等内容 （一）附加成分作解释说明 (1)表达不同原因的概括语 There are several reasons for this. The reasons are as follows. The reason for…is that… The reason why… is that (2)表示无需说明的事实的概括 语： It goes without saying that… It’s needless to say that… Needless to say,… It’s obvious that… （二）根据话题加谚语(Proverb) 1、我们应该集中注意力于学习。 We should focus our mind on our studies. As the saying goes, “ No pains, no gains .” We should focus our mind on our studies... 怎么添加谚语？ 方法——添加与所给信息 或话题有关的谚语或俗语 。 2、锻炼对学生有好处。 It is good for us students to take exercise.. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise. 3、我们应该充分利用时间了。 It is high time for us to make good use of time. As the saying goes, “Time and tide wait for It is high time for us to make no man.” good use of time. 常用谚语(Proverb) Strike the iron while it is hot. 趁热打铁。 Think twice before you do. 三思而后行。 Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。 When in Roman, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 常用谚语(Proverb) Do it now. 机不可失，时不再来。 Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。 It is no use crying over spilt milk. 覆水难收。 An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。 All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。 （三）举例说明 青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products, plant more trees and save water and energy. （四）结尾提出倡议或号召 珍惜每一滴水 Therefore, we should no longer be indifferent about this. To protect our valuable water resources, we should call on people to cherish every drop of water. Otherwise, maybe the last drops of water will be our tears. As middle school students, we also have a part to play. Do remember: we are not saving water , we are saving our own life. With everyone doing his bit, we can make a difference. 保护环境 As students, we should start from ourselves . Here I’d like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment. With everyone doing his bit, we can change the present situation. 参加俱乐部或活动 Don’t hesitate. It will be great fun! Don’t wait. Join us now! Since it has so many benefits, what are you waiting for? Start to join us now! 如何在内容上言之有物？ １. 附加成分作解释说明 ２. 加谚语(Proverb) ３. 举例说明 ４. 结尾提出倡议或号召 现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重， 很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇 文章 原因 1. 缺少运动 2. 饮食结构不合理 建议 1. 多参加体育锻炼 2. 多吃健康食品， 远离垃 圾食品 3. … 参考词汇：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food 要求：1. 字数150左右 2. 对所有要点要适当发挥， 不要简单翻译。 3. 开头已给出， 不计入总数 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned.______________________________________________ 要点分析 1、引出主题。 When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity , our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and fatter? 2、原因。Reasons: 3、建议。Suggestions: 原因：1. 缺少运动 Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than before. Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework, 原因： 2. 饮食结构不合理 Because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight. 建议：1. 多参加体育锻炼 In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. 建议：2. 多吃健康食品， 远离垃圾食品 As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food and junk food. 建议：3.制定合理的计划， 时间表 Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies 合成文章 /aroused Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter /On and the onefatter? hand, In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this problem. For one thing , On the other hand, because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework to do. They are getting less exercise than before. For another , because people’s quality of life has gotten better and In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits , vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies. 要 点 全 连 接 词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化 （较复杂） 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体 语言地道，规范 topic sentence （主题句） a composition supporting sentences （扩展句） ending （结尾句 ） 过渡词：first, second, finally , and, besides, also, but, however, what’s more… Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich. Thank you! 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