Transcript Choosing verbs& The passive voice

Choosing verbs &
The passive voice
English 305; Ashley Aitken, Jenn Cloutier, & Kalvin Hermoso
Professor Bashforth
Choosing verbs!
• Why choosing verbs is important:
– “the choice of verbs, can heighten your awareness
of the effect your writing has on your audience.”
• Types of verbs:
– Idioms
– Single word verbs
Idioms & examples
• Idiom= the verb + particle combination
– Turn down, bring about, put up with, take up, do away with, get on with,
give up
• Best for informal contexts
• Are most frequently seen with the most used verbs: be, have, do, say, make,
go, take, come, see, and get
• Can take away the effectiveness of a phrase because of the numerous
meanings of an idiom.
The examples
• Anna turned down the chance to be on Dancing with the Stars because
she had to do her English homework!
• Naomi and Aimee can easily find a way around
doing all the reading for LRS because they share
each others notes.
• Megan, Alyssa, and Ashley paid no attention to the new Grey’s
Anatomy because they were studying for the final
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The single-word version
• Single-word verb= Only the verb
• Higher Level of Formality
• More effective in technical writings
– Resumes
– Research papers
• Makes writing more effective
– Takes away “flabbiness” and makes the phrase
more specific
Examples…
• Victoria hesitated to give her answer in class,
unsure of what the others might think.
• Martin attended the conference on how to be a
gentleman last week.
• Melissa received the award for
best purse in the ITEP cohort.
The overuse of be
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A culprit in flabby writing
Most frequently used in writing
Takes part in idioms
The writer then should use more specific words for the “be”s
What the “be” words are:
– is, are, be, have, do, say, make, come, see, and get.
Example with a “be” word:
The patio at the Sierra Center was occupied with dozens of
students, even though it was cold outside.
Fixed example:
The patio at the Sierra Center remained occupied with dozens
of students, even though it was cold outside.
Other ways to fix
the overuse of “BE” words
• Appositives
• Absolute Phrases
• Compound Sentences
• Example:
– Last year scientists announced the discovery of the smallest known primate. It is
one of several species of Eosimias (dawn monkey). This extinct animal was no
longer than a human thumb.
– Revision!: Last year scientists announced the discovery of the smallest known
primate, one of several species of Eosimias (dawn monkey), an extinct animal no
longer than a human thumb.
The Passive Voice
• The passive voice isn’t all that bad
– “the passive voice enables the writer to shift emphasis in the
sentence, so that the reader will put the focus where it should be- on
the new information.”
• Doing its job as a transition statement:
– “If Americans are truly interested in saving the rain forests, they
should move beyond rhetoric and suggest policies that are practicaland acceptable –to the understandably wary Brazilians. Such policies
cannot be presented as take-them-or-leave them propositions. If the
U.S. expects better performance from Brazil, Brazil has a right to make
demands in return.”
[Michael D. Lemonick from Time magazine]
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However, we should not use the passive voice for most of the
work we do at school or on the job, because it is not efficient for
that purpose.
Identifying the passive voice
• Uno the beagle won best in show at the Westminster
Dog Show.
• The Westminster Dog Show’s prize for best of show was
received by Uno the beagle.
• The Los Angeles Dodgers are the best team in baseball
this season.
• This season the best team in baseball is the Los Angeles
Dodgers.