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Editing
(Local Revision)
Editing and the Writing Process
4. Editing: Correct ideas by
checking grammar, mechanics,
punctuation, and spelling
3. Revision: Improve writing by
checking organization, unity,
coherence, clarity
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1. Prewriting Generate ideas
brainstorm, cluster, list, freewrite
2. Drafting: Shape ideas from
prewriting by paragraphing.
Defining Editing
What’s the difference between revising
and editing?
•Revision involves making changes to your paper’s
organization, structure, and content
•Editing involves making sure your paper follows standard
English and is free of grammatical and mechanical errors
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Editing in the Writing Process
Why is editing usually the last stage of the
writing process?
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Strategies for Editing
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Read your paper out loud
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Read your paper backwards: start with the
last sentence to help you focus on
grammar/mechanics as opposed to content
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Use an editing checklist
Editing Checklist
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Did you eliminate comma splices, run-ons, and fragments?
Did you check for subject/verb agreement?
Did you check for pronoun agreement?
Did you use your apostrophes correctly?
Did you use semicolons correctly?
Did you punctuate the dependant clauses correctly?
Are your verb tenses consistent?
Did you avoid writing in the passive voice (unless this was your intention)?
Did you check your spelling?
Did you check for proper capitalization?
Did you replace “to be” verbs with strong action verbs?
Be careful with spell checker
Ode to my spell checker
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--Anon
Work Cited
Editing for A’s II Sentence and Grammar. McMaster University. 2006. Web. 4 May
2011.
Editing Marks. Ms Daniel’s Den. Web. 7 May 2012.
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