Transcript practice sentence revisions

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What is wrong with this sentence??
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in japan its considered good luck to cross the path of an black cat
A. In Japan its’ considered good luck to cross the path of a black cat.
B. In Japan its considered good luck to cross the path of an black cat.
C. In Japan it’s considered good luck to cross the path of a black cat.
D. In Japan it’s considered good luck to cross the path of an black cat.
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by A, B, or C
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What needed to be fixed in the sentence you just saw?
Let’s review the rules we needed.
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button in order
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1. Capitalize the first word of a sentence and always punctuate the end.
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2. Add an apostrophe to “its” to show it is a contraction for “it is.”
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3. Capitalize proper nouns (NAMES of people, PLACES, and things).
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4. Use “a” before words beginning with a consonant sound.
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In Japan it’s considered good luck to cross the path of a black cat.
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How is the following sentence written correctly?
according to legend king arthur becomes king when he pulled the magic
sword Excalibur from a stone
A. According to legend, King Arthur becomes king when he pulled the
magic sword Excalibur from a stone.
B. According to legend, King Arthur became king when he pulls the
magic sword Excalibur from a stone.
C. According to legend, King Arthur became king when he pulled the
Choose A, B, or C and click
magic sword Excalibur from a stone.
the red button.
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Read your choices carefully. Hint: you cannot have
the past in the present
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THAT’S RIGHT ON TARGET!
GOOD FOR YOU!
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What was wrong with the sentence?
according to legend king arthur becomes king when he pulled the magic sword
Excalibur from a stone
Click each button to review the rules you used.
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Capitalize the first word of a sentence and always punctuate the end.
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Capitalize proper nouns (NAMES of PEOPLE, places, and things)
and titles that are part of a name (such as King, Mr., President, etc.)
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Place a comma after an introductory phrase.
Make sure all verbs are the same tense throughout the entire sentence
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According to legend, King Arthur became king when he pulled the magic sword
Excalibur from a stone.
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Which is the correct way to
write the following sentence?
cats may have 9 lives but it has only four rows of whiskers
Cats may have nine lives, but it have only four rows of whiskers.
Cats may have nine lives, but they have only four rows of whiskers.
Cats may have nine lives, but they has only four rows of whiskers.
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1 and verb must agree in number!
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Click
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first
You chose the wrong answer. Remember the subject
1 and verb must agree in number!
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second
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YAY!!!!! Good choice!!!
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What needed to be fixed in this sentence?
cats may have 9 lives but it has only four rows of whiskers
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Capitalize the first word of a sentence and always punctuate the end.
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Always write out numbers under ten.
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Place a comma between independent clauses, before conjunctions.
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Pronouns must agree with antecedents in number.
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Subjects and verbs must agree in number.
Cats may have nine lives, but they have only four rows of whiskers.
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Choose the best way to correct the following sentence.
i asked my Biology teacher “what do camels keep in their humps he replied they
keep fat, not water”
A. I asked my Biology teacher “What do camels keep in their humps, he replied they
keep fat, not water”.
B. I asked my biology teacher “What do camels keep in their humps” he replied, “they
keep fat, not water”.
C. I asked my biology teacher, “What do camels keep in their humps?” He replied, “They
keep fat, not water.”
D. I asked my Biology teacher, “What do camels keep in their humps?” He replied,
“They keep fat, not water.”
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Did you find all the errors? Let’s review.
i asked my Biology teacher “what do camels keep in their humps he replied they keep
fat, not water”
Always capitalize the first word of a sentence AND the first word in a new direct quote.
Use a comma when beginning a direct quote.
Do not capitalize subjects unless they are languages or followed by numbers.
Begin a NEW sentence when a NEW speaker speaks.
Put each individual speaker’s words in their own set of quotation marks.
Make sure the ending punctuation goes inside the quotation marks.
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Click each button, one at a time.
I asked my biology teacher, “What do camels keep in their humps?” He replied, “They
keep fat, not water.”
OK, let’s go……..
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Remember your rules and choose the correct way to write this sentence:
90 Million People are added to the Worlds population each year
A. Ninety million people are added to the world’s population each year.
B. Ninety million people are added to the worlds’ population each year.
C. Ninety million people are added to the Worlds’ population each year.
D. 90,000,000 people are added to the Worlds’ population each year.
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your name
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Let’s review what we did to correct the sentence.
90 Million People are added to the Worlds population each year
Click each button.
Never begin a sentence with a number unless you write it out in words.
Only capitalize proper nouns (NAMES of people, places, and things)
Add an apostrophe to a word before the ‘S’ (if the word is singular) to
make it possessive.
Don’t forget to punctuate the end of a sentence.
Time to go!
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Ninety million people are added to the world’s population each year.
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How would you write the following correctly?
did you know that sound travels threw steel more fast than threw heir
Look carefully,
then click the blue
square next to
your choice.
Did you know that sound travels through steel more fast than through air?
Did you know that sound travels through steal faster than through air?
Did you know that sound travels through steel faster then through air?
Did you know that sound travels through steel faster than through air?
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Did you find all the errors?
Let’s look at the rules used to correct them.
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Capitalize the first word and punctuate the end; notice this sentence
needed a question mark.
Be sure to use the correct word when the word is a homonym.
Use comparative forms of words when making comparisons (-er, -est)
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did you know that sound travels threw steel more fast than threw heir
Did you know that sound travels through steel faster than through air?
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Now it is time to practice what
Click each heart.
you have learned.
Turn over the sheet you got.
Do this before clicking the next heart.
Complete the sheet. You may
write on it. Go ahead and click the next heart
Put your paper face down when done and read silently. Click the
last heart.
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Mrs. Green’s
class is #1
Now ‘quit’ and close your laptop and work on your
sentences.
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