Transcript Writing Thesis Statements

Writing Thesis
Statements
“The Scarlet Ibis” Interpretive Essay
What is a Thesis Statement?
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A THESIS STATEMENT is a one-sentence
statement that expresses the central claim that
you will prove in your essay.
It comes at the end of your introductory
paragraph.
It should contain two parts:
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Identification of your topic
An explanation of what your essay will prove/
demonstrate about that topic
What SHOULD be in my thesis?
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It should contain two parts:
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Identification of your topic
An explanation of what your essay will prove/
demonstrate about that topic
In the case of this essay, your thesis needs to
contain:
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The theme you are analyzing
The literary elements that contribute to that theme
What should NOT be in my thesis?
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“Be” verbs (am, are, is, was, were, be, been,
being)
Any “I” statements like “I believe,” “I will
prove,” “I think”
Phrases that call your authority into question
(like “it seems”)
Summary
Interpretive Essay Working Thesis
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Your assignment now is to write a
WORKING THESIS for your interpretive
essay over “The Scarlet Ibis.”
Ex. In “The Scarlet Ibis,” James Hurst uses irony and
personification to suggest that pride has the ability
to cause destruction.
Working Thesis Checklist
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Does my thesis contain
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My theme? (should be yes)
Two (2) literary elements that help build my
theme? (should be yes)
“Be” verbs? (should be no)
“I” statements? (should be no)
NOTE: Each “be” verb or “I” statement will
result in a 50-point deduction. This is a onesentence daily grade.