Transcript Commentary Writing

Writing a Commentary
by Cathi Wiebusch (significantly revised by Lauren
Jackson with input from Tyson and Beverly, English
A: Literature Course Companion)
From the IB Guide
“Literary commentary” refers to a close reading of a
passage.
Students need to explore aspects such as content,
technique, style, structure, theme and language
Assessed on ability to: “ demonstrate understanding of
the thought and feeling in the passage through
interpretation that is supported by detailed references
to the passage” and “analyse and appreciate how the
passage achieves its effects”
A good commentary explains, rather than
summarizing content or listing effects.
Introduction
Name the author, genre, and title (punctuate correctly)
State the subject of the text and comment briefly on how it
develops the subject A
Refer to 1-3 key features of language and style B
Consider:
speaker (poetry) or narrator (prose)? POV?
audience?
Form/structure of the text?
Other literary features?
Thesis statement: presents your argument and interpretation C
What is the central meaning of the text (author’s purpose) AND
how does the writer communicate ideas (literary features/style
analysis)?
Body
Proves your ARGUMENT about the text
Explains HOW the subject matter is presented
and SO WHAT – why is this significant?
Connects discussion of techniques to meaning
Includes PETER
Put PETER in your
paragraph
P: Make a point
E: Provide evidence (introduce the quotations with
your own words—context)
T: Identify literary techniques used by the writer
E: Explain the effects of the techniques (analyze)
R: Respond by connecting the discussion to the
meaning of the text, or showing the Reason the
author did this.
Focus on the
Writer
HOW does the writer use language, literary
devices and WHY?
The poet/writer/author, Kesey, he, she
Verbs (present tense!): conveys, highlights,
uses, takes, implies, suggests, explains,
describes, stresses, presents, shows,
illustrates, indicates, looks, confronts, makes,
evokes, emphasizes, underscores
NOT writes, says, states
Duffy’s use of alliteration helps to convey . . .
Quotation usage
NB: Quote = verb; quotation = noun
Keep it short, focused
Embedded seamlessly into your commentary
so that it is part of your sentence
1. Introduce quotation, give context
2. Quotation
3. Analyze/explain quotation – what does this
reveal? How - identify literary techniques
Conclusion
Brings a sense of completion and closure
Affirms your central point: what’s the most important thing you
said?
Does NOT repeat what you’ve already said
Consider:
What does the text suggest about its subject?
What’s the most significant strength of the text? What
amazes you?
What’s the message? Insight about human experience?
What’s the main effect of the text on the reader?
If you are short of time, this is the paragraph to drop. You can
wrap up your essay with a sentence or two.
Choosing your focus and structure
Two main options:
Linear
Commentary moves sequentially through the extract,
analyzing its progression in sections
Good for texts with clear development
Topic statements = points of transition
Danger: simply retelling the text without analysis
(what it means without the how)
Conceptual
Divisions by content or aspects of language
More holistic look at the text
Shows your control over the argument, points you
want to make
Focusing Commentary
structure of the commentary can be
organized based on:
Purpose/Theme
Tone/Mood
Point of view
Literary Techniques
(style elements)
Structure of text
Themes/Purpose
Organizes the commentary around
theme(s)/purpose of the writer. Why did s/he write
this?
Examples from “The Birds” by Robert Creely
Relationship between speaker and landscape
Nature’s healing powers
Self-knowledge
Dealing with transition in life
Must also focus on HOW the writer conveys ideas
(LTs used) and their EFFECTS (Why did s/he write it
this way?)
Tone and Mood
What is the writer’s tone? Does it
remain the same throughout?
Is there a mood (atmosphere) or
feeling which pervades the piece - eg
gloom, joy, sorrow?
How specifically does the writer create
this tone and mood – diction, imagery,
sound techniques?
What’s the purpose of the tone? How
does it affect
message/meaning/author’s attitude?
POV/Audience
Who is the speaker/narrator? Whose ‘voice’ do
you hear in the text? Does this affect the
message?
Point of view: First, second, third person?
Consider complex POVs, time perspective (eg.
looking back on an experience)
If first person - is the speaker the writer? (don’t
assume!)
Is there an intended audience? Who? How do
you know this?
Style Elements
Organized around literary techniques:
Diction (word-level and overall)
Imagery
Figurative language
Sound devices
Syntax, line choices and punctuation
Setting
Characterization (esp. for prose)
Irony, symbol, allusion, hyperbole, etc.
Always connect to the central meaning of the text – the
impact, EFFECTS of the literary features
Don’t just list literary techniques
Compare
How are the two strategies
1. Themes/Purpose and
2. Style Elements) alike?
Different?
Subject matter
Literal content (may not be significant enough to
base your entire essay on), combine with
something else
What is the text about?
What topic does the text deal with? What story?
Meaning? Shifts? Changes in language?
Diction—very valuable
Use diction to support other points (tone, theme,
purpose, pov, characterization, etc)
Look for “jump” words.
Both denotation and connotation
Concrete vs. abstract? Jargon or dialect? Level of
formality?
motifs or types of words which recur? - eg diction
relating to death, childhood, fear
Unexpected words?
What effect does the diction create?
Imagery
Can also support other points: tone, theme,
subject, characterization
Categories/types of images?
Which senses does the imagery appeal to?
Why?
Effect of the imagery used?
Figurative
language
How does the writer use figurative language and
why?
Look for use of simile, metaphor, personification,
symbolism
Types or categories of comparison? Diverse or
unexpected comparisons?
Connection to tone, theme, purpose?
What is the effect of the figurative language?
Rhyme, rhythm and sound
devices
Consider these even with prose
What sound devices are used and why?
Alliteration? Assonance? Consonance?
Onomatopoeia?
For poetry - does the text have a rhyme scheme?
What is its effect?
How would you describe the rhythm of the
passage? Does the rhythm change at any point? So
what? Syntax can affect rhythm, esp. in prose.
Syntax/Sentenc
e types
What types of sentences are used?
Short/long, simple/complex/
questions/statements/exclamations,
complete/incomplete
Look at the punctuation used eg dashes,
question marks, exclamation marks, ellipsis,
commas. Consider what punctuation is used
and why?
For poetry consider: the use of line breaks,
enjambment, end-stopping, caesura
Structure of the Text
Organized around shifts in the text (may not be
conventional)
consider stanzas/paragraphs, syntax/line
breaks, pattern, general construction of meaning
in the text
Essay works through text from beginning to end
Discusses WHAT (subject) the writer
communicates, HOW (lit techniques) and SO
WHAT (significance/purpose)
First paragraph – identifies the structure of the
text
Structure
What is the overall structure of the piece? How has the
writer organized the text? Look for clear shifts, eg. layout,
time, place, verb tense, subject, speaker/narrator,
character, setting, tone?
Is it a recognizable form? How does the form affect
meaning? (consider historical/traditional use of the form)
Poetry: haiku, ballad, ode, sonnet, villanelle
Prose: compare/contrast, persuasion, description, character
sketch, dialog
Number of stanzas/lines, rhyme scheme, layout, visual
elements?
How does the structure contribute to the impact of the text?