Transcript ASDAVA

ASDAVA
Adjectives
Sensory Details
Action Verbs
Adverbs
Try to picture this.
They were
happy.
Can we change the pronoun
to something more specific?
The girls were
happy.
Can we add some adjectives
to describe the girls?
The two girls with
long, flowing hair
were happy.
Now, let’s try to add
some action verbs.
The two girls with
long, flowing hair
kneeled happily.
Can we tell the reader some
more information about
that verb?
• Where are they kneeling?
• How are they kneeling?
The two girls with long,
flowing hair kneeled happily
in the field of colorful
flowers.
What if we want the reader
to imagine one of the girls
holding something.
The two girls with long, flowing
hair kneeled happily in the field
of colorful flowers. The yellow
haired girl held a basket of
juicy, red strawberries.
Would dialogue help the
picture you’re creating?
“Ring around the rosies, pocket full of
posies,” sang the two girls as they
held hands.
How’s this?