Transcript First EES Meeting

First EES Meeting
30th of June
(10-12)
Location: KOWSAR
Presenter: E.Torbati
Meeting agenda
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10- 10:20
10:20- 10:45
10:45- 11:15
11:15- 12
Dr. M. Moradi
EES
Mr. Moradi presentation
Dr. Behshadfar presentation
Analysis of the manuscript
Kowsar Corp.
EES
• The English Editing group is a division of KOWSAR
which provides English editing services as well as
translating services.
• The main concept of the manuscripts are
Medical sciences and related sciences such as
psychology and microbiology
• At present we just PROOFREAD the manuscripts
but we should shift to COPY EDITING
• The Quality is as important as punctuality
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
Objectives
• To provide fault free editing services
• To consider the authors’ satisfactions which is
the main goal of this group.
• To provide synchronized services
• To develop our services
• To become Copy editor (who?)
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
How could we achieve to our goals?
• Being knowledgeable about Medical texts and
vocabularies (how ?)
• To boost the grammatical and structural
knowledge ( how?)
• To use FORMAL structures
• To have more knowledge
• To accept our faults and try to cover it
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
Sample
• As was demonstrated in our study cigarette
smoking was three times more frequent in
Tuberculosis patients comparing to healthy
individuals. Similar to other researches,
association between Tuberculosis and
smoking was shown to be certain in our study.
????Interventions of smoking cessation are
recommended to be included in the current
Tuberculosis control practice.
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
The edited one
• As demonstrated in our study, cigarette
smoking was three times more frequent in
tuberculosis patients comparing to healthy
individuals, certifying the direct association
between smoking and tuberculosis. Similar
research reports have shown a definite
association between tuberculosis and
smoking. These results prompt for including
interventions for smoking cessation in the
current tuberculosis control practice.
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
Sample
• Among 253 TB patients, 123 (48.6%) were
male and the remainders were female.
• Among the 253 TB patients, 123 (48.6%) were
males, Ninety seven were female (38.3%)
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
Sample
• Similar to other researches, association between
TB and smoking was shown to be certain in our
study. Interventions of smoking cessation are
recommended to be included in the current TB
control practice.
• Similar to other researches, the association
between TB and smoking was demonstrated in
our study. It is therefore recommended to include
interventions for smoking cessation in the current
TB control practice.
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
HIGH LIGHT
1. Please consider to the prepositions and use a
proper prepossession
Sample:
It has been reported that HCV prevalence is very
high in Asian population
It has been reported that HCV prevalence is very
high among Asian population
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Kowsar Corp.
HIGH LIGHT
• Smoking could increase the risk for both TB
infection and development of active TB
disease, among children and adults
• Smoking could increase the risk of both TB
infection and development of active TB
disease, among children and adults
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
HIGH LIGHT
2. please consider that the name of disease
must NOT begin with UPPERCASE.
it has been reported that Tuberculosis is a
disease….
it has been reported that tuberculosis is a
disease which…
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.
High LIGHT
3. Bacteria name should be written in italic
Staph. aurous is a strain of bacteria…..
Staphylococcus aurous is a strain of bacteria….
Dr. M. Moradi
Kowsar Corp.