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Bellwork
Please take a sheet at the table.
 On a separate sheet of paper, complete
a works cited for the sources on the
back of the sheet.
 You no longer have to include the URL
for an Internet citation.
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Zimmerman, Robert. Ethics in the School
System. New York: Hoffman-Brown, 1986.
Print.
 Black, Renee, and Alex Green. Effective
School Administration. Boston: Scholastics,
2011. Print.
 Bright, Clara. “Principal Changes Policies.”
Time 31 Jan. 2011: 113-115. Print.
 Smalley, Jim. “School District Meets Goals
for Improvement.” The Spokesman
Review31 Jan. 2011
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Bellwork: Outline Practice
Place your Topic Possibilities Sheet on your desk.
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The slips given to your group include the thesis, the
topic sentences (claims/reasons), and the
supporting details for each claim (two each).
Organize the slips in the correct order. What is the
thesis? Which sentences would serve as
topic/reason ideas and which are supporting details
within the paragraph?
Use parallel word choice and format the outline
correctly.
Use template provided.
Follow the sample on your final outline sheet.
What it should look like
Dogs are Good People
Thesis: The dogs of College Station deserve the same rights and privileges as granted to our youngest
humans.
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Introduction
College Station dogs are as smart as young children and often make for more polite companions.
A. Dogs are capable of learning up to 250 words and can easily go with the flow of human
interactions.
B. Dogs are quieter and less disruptive than the average two-year-old human.
College Station dogs should be able to walk leash-free if they are accompanied by their human
companions; in most cases, wearing a leash is unnecessary.
A. Dogs can be easily trained to walk alongside their human companions without a leash or
restraint.
B. In a recent survey, 65% of College Station dog owners said that walking a dog on a leash is more
of a hassle than walking a dog leash-free.
More rights for College Station dogs means more rights for College Station’s dog companions.
A. Dog companions will have more choices of places where they can spend time with friends and
family without having to leave beloved pets behind.
B. Dog companions will not have to deal with the trouble of hiring a dog-walker while at work or a
pet-sitter for short weekend getaways.
Conclusion
How to find reliable
You will be required to use two
internet sources, and no more, for the
five required sources in your paper.
 Due at the end of class on Monday—a
works cited page with two internet
sources listed that you want to use
for your paper. Also, attach the
printouts of information that you plan
to use from the sites.
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Web vs. print
Print
 Advertisements
 Books
 Flyers
 Government reports
 Journals
 Leaflets
 Legal documents
 Magazines
 Newspapers
 Pamphlets
 Press releases
 Scholarly journals
 Textbooks
 Trade journals/magazines
Web
 Audio files
 Blogs
 Chat rooms
 Discussion lists/sites
 Emails
 Images
 Interactive websites
 Message boards
 Online radio shows
 PDF documents
 Podcasts
 Video blogs
 Websites
Web vs. print
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Web
 anyone with web access can publish
 author/affiliations and qualifications may
be unclear
 may not clearly identify external
information
 may be biased/misleading
 publication info may not be listed
Web vs. Print
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Print
 extensive publication process
 clearly indicates author/affiliations
 clearly marks outside sources/quotations
 bias exists, but is reviewed
 only qualified manuscripts accepted for
publication
 publication info clearly listed
How to Evaluate Sources
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Be skeptical--availability on the Internet
does not guarantee reliability. Anyone
can post information on the net. Follow
these steps to help check the credibility
of your sources:
Authority
Does the document have a title?
 Who are the authors?
 What type of site is providing the
information?
 Does the site end in .org, .edu, or .gov?
These are generally considered reliable
sources.
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Recency
When was the data last updated? A date
should be listed. Is it recent? Or is not
date listed at all?
 Does the info appear to be the most
recent or current on the subject?
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Accuracy
Does the source adequately define
terms for the average reader?
 Is background information provided?
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Context
Does the document provide references
or links to other info that might clarify its
content?
 Can fact be distinguished from opinion?
 Are sources accurate and within
context?
 Is the document simply a personal
opinion or can it be supported with fact?
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Conducting a Search
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Consider:
 keywords that apply
 what kinds of information you need
 multiple angles
 keep notes
Using Search Terms
Do multiple searches
 Try keyword variations
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 e.g. try “dining hall,” “cafeteria,” and
“campus food service”
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Be specific as you learn more
 e.g. change “dining hall” to “Midwest
university dining hall”
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Boolean Operators: words added to a
search to make it more specific
Defining a Search: Boolean Operators
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AND
 finds pages with all of the search terms used
 e.g. “dining hall” AND “student workers”
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OR
 finds pages with at least one of the search
terms
 e.g. “dining hall” OR “cafeteria” OR “campus
food service”
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NOT
 excludes pages that include the second term
e.g. Henry VII NOT Shakespeare
Defining a Search: Quotation Marks
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Return pages with exact matches
 enter dining hall
○ Get: “As I was dining, I heard a noise coming
from the hall”
 enter “dining hall”
○ Get: “Dining hall food quality is assessed in
this paper.”
Evaluating Search Results
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Domain name extensions
 anyone can register .com, .net, .org domain
names
 not a great way to tell whether a source is
“credible”
 .edu and .gov can only be used by
educational institutions and governmental
institutions
○ still not necessarily reliable
Wikipedia Articles
Often one of the first results listed
 “Web versus Print” slides apply here
 We will not use as one of our two Internet
sources
 Can be useful for:
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 getting an overview
 generating new ideas
 pointing to other sources
How to Cite Sources from the Internet
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Cite what is available; however, if a lot of the required
information is not available for your site that may be a red
flag for you concerning the credibility of your source.
Examples:
Editor, author, or compiler name (if available). Name of Site. Version number.
Name of institution/organization affiliated with the site (sponsor or
publisher), date of resource creation (if available). Medium of publication.
Date of access.
The Purdue OWL Family of Sites. The Writing Lab and OWL at Purdue and
Purdue U, 2008. Web. 23 Apr. 2008.
Felluga, Dino. Guide to Literary and Critical Theory. Purdue U, 28 Nov. 2003.
Web. 10 May 2006.
Thesis Statement
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Complete Sentence
Simple or Complex (Not Compound)
Keep the sentence tight and direct
State as a fact.
Wrong:
I believe gummy worms should be the
official candy of Texas.
Right:
Gummy worms should be the official
candy of Texas.
Planning sheet.
I am giving you the rest of the time to
work on planning.
 Write your thesis statement in the blank
provided.
 After writing your thesis, begin
brainstorming reasons for and against
your thesis.
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