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Results
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This study examined fine motor skills in 20 children (time required to
make origami crane (s)) between males and females at two different ages
(7 and 13)
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In this study, we compared fine motor skills between males and
females at ages 7 and 13, using a two-way ANOVA with gender and
age as the two between subjects factors. The analysis revealed a
significant main effect of gender (F(1, 16) = 125.93, p<0.001), a
significant main effect of age (F(1, 16) = 36.94, p<0.001), but no
significant interaction between age and gender (F(1, 16) = 0.41,
p>0.05). Females completed the origami crane significantly faster
than males, regardless of age. Older children (13) also had
significantly faster completion rates than younger children (7),
irrespective of gender.
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Table 1
Mean Median RTs and Percentages of Correct Responses in Experiment 1a
Set Size = 6
Tgt. Pres.
Lag
Set Size = 12
Tgt. Abs.
Tgt. Pres.
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Median RT (ms) 963
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893
630
517
899
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520
% Correct
96.6 99.0 98.7 97.9 97.0 98.7 97.2 97.6 98.7 95.7 98.6 98.7
Note – RT = Reaction Time; Tgt. = Target; Pres. = Present; Abs. = Absent; ms = milliseconds
Table 1: Correlation matrix between belief that atheists are common
(BAC), Belief in a Dangerous World (BDW), belief in God (BiG), and
explicit negative attitudes towards atheists (NATA).
Measure
BAC
BDW
BiG
NATA
BAC
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0.14
0.04
-0.15
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0.16
0.36*
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0.55*
BDW
BiG
NATA
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*p < 0.01
See p.163 of 5th manual for sample regression table
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Figure 1: Mean amount of money offered to the “Responder”, showing no
significant main effect of the “Responder’s” religious affiliation or the
participants’ belief in God. There was no significant interaction
between these factors. Error bars represent +/- 1 standard deviation.
Figure 2: Mean amount of money offered to the atheist “Responder” by
participants who reported belief in God and those who did not. There
were no significant differences between the groups. Error bars
represent +/- 1 standard deviation.
Figure 3: Correlation between belief in God and explicit negative attitudes
towards atheists (NATA) (p < 0.01).
Figure 4: Correlation between explicit negative attitudes towards atheists
(NATA) and the amount of money offered to the atheist responder (p >
0.05).
Figure 5: Correlation between Belief in a Dangerous World and explicit
negative attitudes towards atheists (NATA) (p < 0.01).
Discussion
References
Appendixes
Footnotes
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Comparing Groups – One IV
Main Effects and Interactions (2+ IV’s)
Main Effects and Interactions (2+ IV’s)
Experiment 1
Reaction Times (in milliseconds)
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