Transcript Slide 1

Edward Dobry
Wilkes University
November 2, 2011
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*Click the avid learner to watch about the perfect paragraph*
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The 4 Elements:
*Topic
*Facts
*Unity
*Coherence
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•Develop a Thesis statement
ex: quotes, direct statements, overviews
•Thesis= idea or purpose of what you
want to say
•“Thesis is the key”
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•Must support the main idea
•Minimal of two facts per paragraph
•Must be in your own words
•May be literal or inferential
*literal= who?, what?, where?, when?
*inferential= why?, how?
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•A single key idea unites related
facts
•Facts and thoughts must be
relevant
•Unity=“one-ness”
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•Ideas must:
*Stick together
*Be Logically connected
*Relate to the paragraph topic
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Topic Sentence
Supporting Idea #1
Supporting Idea #2
Supporting Idea #3
Conclusion
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Paragraphs should include:
-Formal English
-Correct use of Grammar
-Proper Word Usage
-Word Structure
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•No slang
ex: “wassup?”, “ain’t”, etc…
•No informal English
ex: can’t, don’t, sucks, etc…
•No use of 1st or 2nd person pronouns
ex: I, you, your, etc…
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•Parts of Speech
-noun, adjective, preposition, etc…
•Parts of a Sentence
-subject, predicate, complement, etc…
•The Phrase
-prepositional phrases, appositives, etc…
•The Clause
-independent/subordinate clauses, etc….
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•Agreement
-subject, verb, pronoun, and antecedent
•Correct use of Verbs
•Correct use of Pronouns
•Correct use of Modifiers
-comparison and placement
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•Capital letters
•Punctuation
•Italics vs. Quotations
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http://www.enotes.com/topics/how-write-perfectparagraph
http://www.iser.com/resources/essay-writing.html
http://www.teacherjoe.us/PREP.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/paragra
phs.htm
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CLEARVUE & SVE (Producer). (1999). Perfect:
Paragraph. [Full Video]. Available from
http://www.discoveryeducation.com/
Warriner, O. E., Whitten, M. E., & Griffith, F.
(1977). English grammar and composition, third
course. (3 ed.). Harcourt Brace Jovanovich, Inc.
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