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“The Quick Scan”
Tailor-made language advice
for SMEs
Hilde Hanegreefs & Mark Pluymaekers
Zuyd University of Applied Sciences
Research Centre for International
Relationship Management
1. Why professional
communication?
2. Why the Quick Scan?
Why?
3. Why linguistics?
Why professional communication?
“Communication is not just a soft skill”
(Waldeck, 2012)
• Lack of ability to communicate clearly &
effectively
• Lack of training in writing skills
• Recent challenges:
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An ever changing professional environment
New forms of organizing
Powerful communication technologies
A greater emphasis on globalism
Why the Quick Scan?
 To encourage the exchange of knowledge between
academics and entrepreneurs, and to improve and
expand education in writing
 Deliverables:
• PRACTICE – clear and successful professional
communication
• RESEARCH – more and better insights,
database
• EDUCATION – good/bad practices, input for
teaching writing
Why linguistics?
• Focus on writing / the writing process
• “Clear writing means clear thinking
means…” & “Rewriting is the key to
improved thinking”
(Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987; Schulman, 2005)
• Framework:
– Business communication (BC)
– Discourse Analysis & Text Linguistics
1. A “Quick Scan”?
What?
2. Focus on...
A “Quick Scan”?
= an audit tool for high-quality text revision
• It is QUICK
• It is TAILOR-MADE
• It is RESEARCH-BASED
• It gives ADVICE and TRAINING can be
provided
Focus
• Writing
(for the moment)
on…
(e.g., newsletters, press releases, webpages, e-
mails and letters)
• in Dutch,
• in SMEs
• in the South-Limburg region (NL).
In the future, the approach will be put in a
more ‘global’ perspective.
1. Quantitative methods
How?
2. Qualitative methods
3. Case study
Quantitative methods
• Readability tests
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Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease/Grade Level (Flesch 1951)
Based on word & sentence length
BUT: spurious relationship between these automatic tests
and traditional time-consuming tests on text
comprehension (o.a. Kraf & Pander Maat, 2009)
• Word frequency
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Textstat, word cloud, SLM-analysis (De Hertog et al., 2014)
Type-token distinction, function/structure vs.
content/lexical words
BUT: meaningless if not compared to a
larger body of texts
Qualitative methods
[~ empirical content/form analysis]
• Discourse Analysis & Text Linguistics:
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Relation between text & context, genres of discourse
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Text as communication system: author-addressee
interaction, communicative context
 CCC-model (Renkema, 2012):
 3 dimensions: correspondance, consistence, correctness
 5 levels: genre, content, structure, writing style,
presentation/lay-out
• Usability tests
Case study: set-up
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A QS of websites and brochures published by 5
Dutch Hotel Management Schools
[Hotel Management School Maastricht (HMSM), Saxion (Apeldoorn), Hogere
Hotelschool Stenden/Leeuwarden, NHTV (Breda), Hotelschool The Hague
(Den Haag)]
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Websites: first 5 screens
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Brochures: sent to first-year students
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Research question: “To what extent do these texts
reflect the schools’ values?”
Case study
[QT] Readability scores:
Website
Den Haag F-K RE:(47,5) | GL: (11)
Brochure
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NHTV
F-K RE:(26,4) | GL: (14,1)
F-K RE:(45,4) | GL: (8,4)
Saxion
F-K RE:(49,8) | GL: (10)
F-K RE:(48,5) | GL: (8,1)
Stenden
F-K RE:(35,8) | GL: (11,9)
F-K RE:(40,6) | GL: (9,3)
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Brochures:
F-K RE:(37,5) | GL: (11,4)
HMSM
F-K RE:(13,6) | GL: (12)
Case study: websites
[QT] Word frequency:
• vague and general (hotel and management); Den
Haag, NHTV and Stenden specify more
(international, experience, hospitality,
programme, selection).
Case study: websites
[QL] CCC-model:
• Genre: information medium, always and everywhere
available, up-to-date, worldwide >< not easy to find
• Content: values, program, practical info, etc. ><
expectations not always met (cf. usability tests)
• Structure: short, clear, cohesive and coherent ><
too short, unclear, not coherent
• Writing style: uniform, to-the-point, adequate ><
vague
• Presentation: adequate, content-form,
‘scannable’, consistent >< chaotic
4/1/2016
Ranking
BROCHURE
Readability
WEBSITE
CCC
Readability
CCC
1 Saxion / NHTV
HMSM
1 Saxion
Stenden/Den Haag
2 Stenden
Stenden
2 Den Haag
HMSM
3 HMSM
Saxion / NHTV
3 Stenden/HMSM
Saxion
4 NHTV
NHTV
“The major failing of quantitative measures is that
they operate with tools that are abstract from the
actual circumstances of production.” (Rimmer, 2009)
1. Work in progress
Next?
2. Input required on…
Work in progress
• From September:
– Run a pilot study in a ‘real’ enterprise
– Develop a set of scripts
– Develop a website (supply-demand)
– Develop a database
• Input required on:
– Additional useful statistics / metrics
– The existence of large BC corpora
Comments or remarks?
Please send them to:
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