Transcript paragraph and essay writing

PARAGRAPH AND ESSAY
WRITING
• Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics.
First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion.
Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purposes.
Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever.
For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as
the day it was minted twenty-three centuries ago. Another important
characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science. For
many years, it has been used in hundreds of industrial applications.
The most recent use of gold is in astronaut suits. Astronauts wear
gold-plated heat shields for protection outside spaceships. In
conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty, but also for its
utility.
• The topic sentence:
• Topic
• Controlling idea
characteristics
: Gold
: two important
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Supporting sentences:
First of all,
For example,
Another important
The most recent use
• The concluding sentence
• In conclusion,
• Unity: Discuss only one main idea in one
paragraph
• Coherence: Easy to read and understand
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Topic sentence:
a complete sentence
contains both topic and controlling idea
the most general statement in a paragraph
not too specific or too general
do not include too many unrelated ideas
• Concluding sentence
• Signals the end of a paragraph.
• Summarize the main point of the
paragraph.
• It gives a final comment on the topic
• End of paragraph signals
• Finally, as a result, in conclusion, in
summary, therefore, thus, indeed, in brief,
In short, …
The Magic Slurry Water
• Slurry water can increase the strength of gypsum
product in two ways. Firstly, the dihydrate particles in
slurry water will act as extra nuclei besides the main
nuclei in gypsum setting process. Secondly, the particles
will fill the spaces among the crystals which can enhance
the interlocking between them. Both conditions were
tested by ultra sound examinations producing short
waves in dense gypsum mass. In conclusion, slurry
water will increase the amount of nuclei and raise the
density of gypsum product which finally increases the
gypsum strength.
Abstract
• Patients with little pain sensation at gingival in terms of
percussion need x-ray test before and after the
treatment. It is important to evaluate the specification of
the pathologic condition that happened at tooth/jaw
inspection. The study was taken from tooth 3.6 a woman
of 19 years old. The periapical technique is used to
perform radiographic imaging. There are circular small
radiolucent at mesial root, and 3 cm in diameter radioopaque mass that includes mesial root. After 6 months of
radiographic treatment, it was shown that the size of
radio-opaque mass had relatively the same size. In
conclusion, the patients should be treated in order to
release pain.
Stomatitis aphthousa is a common
disease in oral cavity
• Deficiency of certain vitamins such as
Vitamin B, folic acid, and Fe.
• Traumatic factors causing among others
by tooth brush, bite, orthodontic
appliances
• Hormonal disturbances
• Immunological system
• Stress
Stress may trigger Stomatitis aphthousa.
- The decrease of the volume of saliva
- The dry mouth
- Unsensitive tongue
- Irritation
- lesion
• Tobacco is one factor that may cause oral
cancer.
- Irritates the mouth because of its heat and
substance.
- contains of 4000 toxic agents
- Influences oral flora environment
• Plaque control is an important part of
maintenance phases.
• Stomatitis aphthousa is a common
disease in oral cavity
• Dental implants are one way to replace
lost teeth that are increasingly popular at
this time