Transcript ADJECTIVALS

ADJECTIVALS
• Adjective: a word that modifies a noun
• There are many forms that do the work of adjectives: a variety
of words, phrases and clauses
NOUN PHRASES
• Adjectivals can be examined in the context of the noun phrase
(in relation to the noun headword)
• In a noun phrase, each form has its own place:
• The single-word modifiers (determiners, adjectives
and nouns) come before the noun
• The phrases and clauses follow the noun
PRE-HEADWORD MODIFIERS
a)Determiners
• Most nouns require a determiner:
Articles (a, an, the)
Possesive nouns (teachers’, animal’s…)
Possessive pronouns (my, your,…)
Demonstrative pronouns (this, those,…)
Numbers
Some common words (such, the former, the latter,… ...)
• The determiner can provide a bridge between ideas:
• i.e. Selection of the determiner can affect rythm of the sentences
• See the following examples:
The decision that Ben made was the right one.
That decision of Ben’s was the right one.
Ben’s decision was the right one.
Every such decision Ben made ….
His decision…
Such a decision might have been questionable..
A decision like that…
Now go to Group Discussion on p. 159 and add all the missing
determiners in the paragraphs.
B) Adjectives and Nouns
• Adjectives and nouns fill the position between the determiner
and the headword.
• The order is like this:
Adj
dismal
new
important
Noun
weather
pizza
career
• We frequently use more than one adjective
• a recent covert military operation
• an unusual financial arrangement
• Do we use comma between adjectives?
• We do when they are of the same class (e.g. Subjective qualities,
age,…)
• E.g. An exciting, innovative concept (an exciting and innovative
concept)
• We do not when they are different kinds of qualities
• E.g. Covert military operation
• Sometimes prenoun modifiers are themselved modified:
• A highly unusual situation
• A really important decision
• In these examples, we do not use a hyphen
• But, with nouns and adjectives as modifiers, we use a hyphen:
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The English-speaking world
A four-door minivan
A small-town high school teacher
The end-of-the-term play
The five-year-old boy
Modifier noun proliferation
• Sometimes we might need to put too many adjectives
together.
• Faculty curriculum committee meeting minutes
• This is not grammatically incorrect, but maybe difficult for the
readers to follow. We may use it as follows:
• The minutes of the faculty curriculum committee
meeting
• Now go to exercise 28 on p. 162
POST-HEADWORD MODIFIERS
A) Prepositional Phrases
• The most occuring postnoun modifiers
• They answer the question of «Which one?»
• The security guard in our building knows every tenant
personally.
• The meeting during our lunch hour was a waste of
time.
• Prepositional phrases can function as the adverb or the
adjective of a sentence
• Avoid proliferating prepositional phrases:
• You can undoubtedly find many such sentences in the
pages of this book about the grammar of English for
writers.
• The last 3 adjectival phrases are unnecessary!
• How to avoid proliferation?
• A prenoun modifier can be used instead:
• An elderly lady with white hair = an elderly white-haired lady
• Guests for dinner = dinner guests
• The monologue in the second act = the second-act monologue
• The problems with the budget = the budget problems
• The final exam in calculus = the calsulus final
• Or you can choose a more precise word
• A bunch of flowers = a bouquet
• The main character of the story = the protagonist
• Birds that fly south in the winter = migratory birds
B) Adjective Phrases
• Adjectives are placed before nouns, but when they are expanded into a
phrase, they are placed after nouns, and they comment on the subject
• The hot, tired Boy Scouts trudged the last mile to their campsite
• The Boy Scouts, hot and tired, trudged the last mile to their
campsite.
• The adjective phrases in the following sentences answer the question
«which» (see the difference in punctuation!)
• The students unable to attend the audition will have to make
special arrangements with the play director. (answers which
student)
C) Participial Phrases
• A participial phrase is a verb phrase headed by the present or past
participle form of the verb.
• E.g.
• The helicopter hovering over the roof frightened the dogs.
• We were shocked to see all the homeless people living on the
streets of Lost Angeles.
• The travelers going through airport security do not look happy.
• Participles are like adjective and prepositional phrases: they add
information about the noun headword.
• Then, why do we use participles?
• Look at these examples
• The helicopter hovered over the roof and frightened the dogs.
(compound predicate)
• The helicoper frigtened the dogs as it hovered over the roof. (main
clause and dependent clause)
• However, the participial phrase allows us to include both verbal
ideas in a more concise way.
• Hovering over the roof, the helicopter frigtened the dogs.
• The Prenoun Participle:
• When the participle is a single word, it generally occupies the
adjective preheadword position.
• Our snoring visitor kept the household awake.
• The barking dog next door drives us crazy.
• I should replace that broken hinge.
• The old hound growled at every passing stranger
• An adverb can modify the participle
• A fast-moving object
• A well-developed paragraph
• A carefully conceived plan
• The Movable Participle
• Participles can also be placed at the beginning of a sentence if it
modifies the subject and if it is set off by a comma
• Read the following sentences, noticing the use of present and past
participle.
• Looking out of the window, my mother waved to me.
• Carrying all of their supplies, the Boy Scouts trudged up the
mountain in search of a campsite.
• Laughing uproariously, the audience stood and applauded.
• Shifting his weight from one foot to the other, the man looked
impatient as the waited by the fountain.
• Pressured by Congress, the president agreed to support an increase
in the minimum wage.
• Exasperated, she made the decision to leave immediately.
• They can be placed at the end of the sentence as well.
• The Boy Scouts trudged up the mountain in search of a
campsite, carrying all of their supplies on their backs.
• The audience stood and applauded, laughing
uproariously.
• The position of participles depend on the rythm and the focus
of the sentences (cohesion)
• The Dangling Participle
• Participles can be used at the beginning and end of a sentence
only if they modify the subject (subject of the participle is the
subject of the sentence as well); otherwise, it dangles.
• E.g.
• Carrying all of our supplies for miles, the campground was a
welcome sight. (dangling)
• Carrying all of our supplies for miles, we were exhausted by the
time we reached the campground. (correct version)
• Furiously filling in the bubbles on the answer sheet, the time
was up before I could finish the test. (dangling)
• Furiously filling in the bubbles on the answer sheet, I still
wasn’t able to finish the test before time was up. (correct)
• Having moved all the outdoor furniture into the garage, there
was no room left for the car. (dangling)
• After we moved all the outdoor furniture into the garage,
there was no room left for the car. (correct)
• Some participles used as sentence-opening and not dangling,
although the subject is not the same.
• Speaking of old movies, have you seen Gaslight?
• Speaking of the weather, we should probably cancel the
picnic.
• Regarding your job interview, the supervisor called to
change the time.
• Concerning the recent book about the Kennedys, several
reviewers have doubted its credibility.
• Now go to p. 169 for Exercise 29
• Relative Clauses
• They are like participial phrases:
• The helicopter that is hovering over the roof frightened the dogs.
• We were shocked to see all the homeless people who are living
on the streets of Los Angeles.
• The travelers who are going through airport security do not look
happy.
• However, relative clauses are not moveable; they almost
always follow the noun they modify.
• Relatives can be in the form of a relative pronoun (who, that,
which) or a relative adverb (where, when, why)
• ‘Who’ has different forms depending on its case:
• Who (subjective)
• Whose (possessive)
• Whom (objective)
• Who as the subject in the clause
• The man who called last night wouldn’t leave his
name. (the man called)
• Who as the possessive (determiner) in the clause
• The student whose notes I borrowed was absent
today. (the student’s notes)
• Who as the object in the clause
• Our dog, Rusty, whom we all dearly loved, was
recently killed on the highway. (loved the dog)
• When the relative pronoun is in object position in the clause,
it can be deleted if it is restrictive (not set off by commas)
• Nonrestrictives are not deleted.
• E.g.
• King Edward gave up the throne of England for the
woman (whom) he loved. (restrictive)
• Our dog, Rusty, whom we all dearly loved, was
recently killed on the highway. (nonrestrictive)
• PS. ‘That’ is not used for nonrestrictive clauses
• E.gs for relative adverbs
• Newsworthy events rarely happen in the small town where I
lived as a child.
• We will all feel nervous until next Tuesday, when results of the
auditions will be posted.
• I understand the reason why Margo got the lead.
The Broad-Reference Clause
• Sometimes, ‘which’ can refer to the whole idea, not only the
preceding noun (broad reference)
• Joe, bought a gas guzzler, which surprised me.
• Tom cleaned up the garage without being asked, which made me
suspect that he wanted to borrow the car.
• Sometimes broad references might cause confusion; then you can
use a noun that sums up the whole idea.
• Joe bought a gas guzzler, a decision that surprised me.
• Tom cleaned up the garage without being asked, a rare event that
made me suspect that he wanted to borrow the car.
• Other solutions to broad references:
• I broke out in a rash, which really bothered me. (broad ref.)
• I broke out in a rash, a problem that really bothered me.
• Breaking out in a rash really bothered me.
• The rash I got last week really bothered me.
• Now go to Exercise 30 on p. 172-173
Punctuation of Phrases and
Clauses
• Remembering the general rules:
• The president who was elected in 1932 faced problems with the
parliament.
• (no commas here because NP, ‘the president’ is modified)
• Roosevelt took office at a time when the outlook for the nation was
bleak indeed. The president, who was elected in 1932, faced
problems with the parliament.
• (commas used because the readers know who the president is)
• The same rule works for the participials
• The merchants holding the sidewalks sales hoped for good weather.
General rules of punctuation in
Adjectivals
• 1.
that-clause never gets a comma (restrictive)
• 2. which-clause generally gets a commas (non-restrictive).
When in doubt, use ‘that’
• 3. If the relative pronoun can be deleted, not commas
(restrictive)
• The bus (that) I ride to work is always late
• 4.
After proper nouns, use commas
• Willamette University, which was established last year, is within
walking distance.
• 5. After common nouns with only one possible referents,
use commas
• The highest mountain in the world, which resisted the efforts of
climbers, looks truly forbidding from the air.
• Mike’s twin brother, who lives in Austin, has a personality just like
Mike’s.
• My mother, sitting by the window, is talking to herself.
• Now go to Exercise 31 and 32 on p. 175-176