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Ballads
Studying and writing
great ballads
• Ballad Writing Tips
• often have verses of four lines
• usually have a rhyming pattern: either abac or aabb
or acbc (usually the easiest to rhyme)
• repetition often found in ballads
– entire stanzas can be repeated like a song's chorus
– lines can be repeated but each time a certain word is changed
– a question and answer format can be built into a ballad: one
stanza asks a questions and the next stanza answers the
question
• Ballads contain a lot of dialogue.
• Action is often described in the first person
• Two characters in the ballad can speak to each other on
alternating lines
• Sequences of "threes" often occur: three kisses, three
tasks, three events, for example
Structure
• Most of the ballads that have survived to
the present day can be divided into verses
of four lines. This number can vary-sometimes a 6 or 8 line verse is inserted
into the ballad (Tam Lin).
• Ballads contain a lot of dialogue.
• Rhyme
• Most ballads use one of three different
types of rhyme: abac, aabb, or abcb.
• The first type of rhyme, abac, is found in
ballads that include a chorus in the verse:
the first and third lines of each verse
rhyme, while the second and fourth lines,
the chorus, are the same in every verse.
Example of ABAC rhyme scheme
She went down below the thorn
Fine Flowers in the Valley
And there has she her sweet babe born
And the green leaves they grow rarely
She's ta'en out her little penknife
Fine flowers in the valley
And there she's twinned her sweet babe of it's life
And the green leaves they grow rarely
In the second type, aabb, the first and second
lines rhyme with eachother, as do the third and the
fourth lines.
As I was walking al alane
I saw twa corbies makin' mane
the tane untae the tither did say
where shall we gang and dine the day?
The third type of rhyme, abcb, is the most common type of
rhyme found in Child's ballads. In this rhyme scheme, only
the second and fourth lines rhyme:
• Her breath was strang, her hair was lang
And twisted twice about the tree
• And with a swing she came about
• "Come to Craigy's sea and kiss with me"
How do I start writing a ballad?
• Start with a key phrase...
– ...that pops into your head,
– ...or strikes you when somebody says it,
– ...and is connected with something you feel strongly
about.
• Build on this phrase.
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Images related to the phrase
Similar phrases
Rhyming words
A tune that fits the phrase
• Ask yourself questions.
– Who is saying this phrase?
– ...Why? ...Where? ...To whom?
– What is the reply?
– How did they get into this situation?
– Consequences
• What rhymes with the key phrase?
– Do these rhyming phrases trigger more
images?
• Construct verses.
– Most usual is 4 lines, with the 2nd line rhyming with
the last.
– Arrange the verses into sequence.
• Cobble together more verses to make a story.
– The initial fill-in verses may be Yuk! but they give your
imagination a framework.
– Sing them over and over until, days (months?) later,
better words come to you.
– http://www.studyguide.org/ballad_examples.htm
– Examples of ballads